BLURB:
Daniel
Marten crossed the Burning Sea and convinced himself that he is the Prophesied
One. But what does that mean? In this second installment of the Prophecy
Chronicles trilogy, Daniel forges new alliances in his bid to save Naphthali
from the Emperor. He meets the
Tene’breon, a magical race that has evolved to use the Weave as effortlessly as
he breathes air. The leaders of this
race recognize him for what he is…but they also see something more.
Naphthali has been dramatically altered by the rule of a
new governor, a man whose power is tied to Daniel in a horrifying way. How far will Daniel go to save
Naphthali? And what is the secret that
binds his destiny with his new allies?
Only time will tell in The Prophecy Chronicles: Prophecy Revealed.
GUEST POST:
Character Creation
By Ron Hartman
Where does a good character come
from? And what is a good character, for that matter? Obviously you’d want someone compelling,
someone that has their own story. You
don’t want every character to only be there to further the story you’re trying
to tell. If you do, it ends up all
sounding like one character with many voices, rather than the concrete
individuals you’re actually creating.
I think a good example of this is
Daniel Marten, the central character in The Prophecy Chronicles. He is where the entire project started. I had a nucleus of an idea: a man taken from
his family for reasons he can’t understand, who is driven to find a way home
even though others are constantly trying to move him at cross-purposes to his
own. Sounds like a good start,
right? I knew I wanted a man that loved
his family deeply, that couldn’t imagine life without them. I also needed a man that had something unique
about him. It didn’t necessarily need to
be the trait others were trying to exploit, but it did need to be something
that could develop as his adventure unfolds.
As with all my characters, I spent a
lot of time with Daniel, thinking about what that would mean for him. How would he relate to the people around
him? Would he believe the story he’s
being told, that he is a prophesied savior, or would he need proof? Even then
would he believe? Would there ever
be anything that would make him forsake his family? I wanted to answer those questions, but
above all I wanted him to be unexpected, and have room to grow.
I wanted Daniel to be a hero, so he
started out as an antihero. I wanted him
to be strong, so came into the world of Naphthali weak. That gave me the basis for growth, but he
couldn’t be a clean slate. He had to
start somewhere. I wanted him to be genuine, compassionate,
and believable. In my full-time job, I’m
a pharmacist, a member of “the most trusted profession in America”, so I know a
thing or two about compassion. Consequently
it was an easy decision to make Daniel a member of the same noble
profession. I guess that is also the
crux of a central character—write what you know. If you’re a pharmacist, you don’t make your
protagonist an astrophysicist. If you
can’t make the character believable, you’re asking for trouble!
So there I had the basis for my
character, a man I was going to do horrible things to. I was going to send him through a crucible,
to forge him into something different. I
knew he’d change, but I didn’t realize at the time the extent to which the
things I did was going to affect him.
Keep in mind, this is a real person now, not just an automaton to do my
bidding. After all, I’m just a writer.
Daniel has changed since the story
started, when he awoke on a battlefield.
He is stronger, but he’s also scarred.
He carries the sacrifices of those that believe in him like a heavy
weight around his shoulders. It bows
him, and at times almost buries him. I
really do feel sorry for Daniel, a nice guy that was minding his own business
until he became a character in my story.
Will he find the strength to be the man I wanted him
to be? The man I thought he was when the
trilogy was nothing more than an outline?
There is something about him that makes me think he will, or at least I
hope so. As I said, I had a hand in his
creation, but he’s his own man now. I
never imagined he’d carry such a burden, but he soldiers on, looking for a way
to find his family and save Naphthali…
So that brings us back to the original
question: where does a good character
come from? I could say he sprang from my
mind, fully formed, but that is a little too arrogant to be true. I think a good character starts with an idea. You mold that idea as best you can, and then
you just…let him go. Send him out into
the world and see what happens. If
you’re lucky, he’ll go where you want, but he just might surprise you.
EXCERPT:
He heard a noise and turned to see Meadow Song walking across the map
room at the tower's top. He walked through the double doors to greet her and
was surprised when she pulled him in close, hugging him tight. His left arm
wrapped around her waist and his hand slid up her back until it cupped the base
of her neck. She tilted her head up as he leaned in and their lips brushed
together. Her tongue darted in his mouth, soft and sweet, and a hot rush
bloomed inside him as he pressed into her, responding to her need with his own.
Barely registering over his desire, a part of Daniel's mind whispered, so different from Ashley. The feel, the
taste…
He gasped and pulled away. Meadow Song looked up at him, her eyebrows
raised. "What is it?" Her voice was low and husky.
Daniel hesitated before breathing, "I-I love you."
Her face lit with a soft radiance. "And I you. Why do you stop?"
Daniel's arm fell away and he stepped back. It was too easy to lose his
resolve when he stood in her warm embrace. "I can't," he whispered.
He closed his eyes and saw Ashley. "I may never see them again, but I can't betray them."
Meadow Song frowned before understanding dawned. "Ashley is a
fortunate woman." Daniel's heart wrenched at the pain in her whisper.
AUTHOR INFORMATION:
Ron Hartman has had a
life-long passion for the written word and is an avid reader. The
Prophecy Chronicles are his first written works. The first in the series, Prophecy Foretold,
was released in October of 2012.
Prophecy Revealed is the second in the trilogy. Ron graduated from
the University of Iowa College of Pharmacy in 2000 and lives in Ottumwa, Iowa
with his wife and three children.
Website link: www.prophecychronicles.com
Purchase link at Rogue
Phoenix Press: http://shop.roguephoenixpress.ieasysite.com/category_v3.aspx?categoryid=96
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A great guest post. It's important to have a vested interested in the characters.
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ReplyDeleteThank you! Once the characters are created, they tend to have a mind of their own, so you never completely know where they're going! If you get a chance to read The Prophecy Chronicles, I hope you enjoy it!
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